Essay LR
Emily GCSE Media – Industries, Internet and Audiences essay learner response – December 2019
Post this in a new blogpost on your Media blog called ‘Industry and Audience essay Learner Response’ then complete the LR tasks/questions below.
Audience essay feedback:
WWW:
• An ability to write a sustained essay that argues a viewpoint e.g. a strong and developed introduction and conclusion which responds to the statement
• An ability to comment on the three traditional types of media industries e.g. music, film and television and print and how the internet has impacted these with specific examples such as the Film and Television industry changing due to the rise of streaming service; Netflix
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EBI:
• Lacking enough detail on the print industry e.g. look back at planning sheet on this industry section
LR: see GCSE Media Year 1 blog
2) What was the word count for your essay?
842 words
3) What was your strongest paragraph? Why do you think it was better than others?
my film and television paragraph because i had very detailed answers and elaborated on most of my points compared to the other evaluations
4) What was your weakest paragraph? Why do you think it wasn't as good as others?
my weakest paragraph was my print industry paragraph because i did further explain and elaborate on my points.
5) How can you improve your extended writing in GCSE Media Studies in future?
i can improve by revising the key points and the weaknesses and advantages to then go into further detail.
6) Write ONE thing you have learned about the internet, audience and industry from completing this essay.
i now know about the advantages and disadvantages of the music, film and television, and the print industry. it has given me a head start to practising a 500-800 word essay
Post this in a new blogpost on your Media blog called ‘Industry and Audience essay Learner Response’ then complete the LR tasks/questions below.
Audience essay feedback:
WWW:
• An ability to write a sustained essay that argues a viewpoint e.g. a strong and developed introduction and conclusion which responds to the statement
• An ability to comment on the three traditional types of media industries e.g. music, film and television and print and how the internet has impacted these with specific examples such as the Film and Television industry changing due to the rise of streaming service; Netflix
•
EBI:
• Lacking enough detail on the print industry e.g. look back at planning sheet on this industry section
LR: see GCSE Media Year 1 blog
2) What was the word count for your essay?
842 words
3) What was your strongest paragraph? Why do you think it was better than others?
my film and television paragraph because i had very detailed answers and elaborated on most of my points compared to the other evaluations
4) What was your weakest paragraph? Why do you think it wasn't as good as others?
my weakest paragraph was my print industry paragraph because i did further explain and elaborate on my points.
5) How can you improve your extended writing in GCSE Media Studies in future?
i can improve by revising the key points and the weaknesses and advantages to then go into further detail.
6) Write ONE thing you have learned about the internet, audience and industry from completing this essay.
i now know about the advantages and disadvantages of the music, film and television, and the print industry. it has given me a head start to practising a 500-800 word essay
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